Thursday, June 4, 2009

Story that ended without an ending

A story

Never written

Never completed

Ended without an ending

Lingering effects

Sub effects

Constant searches

In faces

In feelings

In a mask

Sometimes

featuring in between dreams

fading in obscurity

but yet something potent

a dream of 'impossible'

is what makes it alive

6 comments:

  1. Nice one Neetijee! Our life is a collection of 'never written' stories and never fulfilled dreams. Your words are very powerful.

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  2. Neeti ji some story has no ending

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  3. Thank you basantaji, indeed there are several stories and dreams that are not always realized and written. Deepji, thanks for your comments too. I enjoyed going through your blog

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  4. nice to see your blog ..Yeah, really enjoying while reading.

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  5. It is really a gr8 one Neeti...

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  6. Most of our life is unwritten and hidden. But still, we live and try to empower ourselves and others so as to make a meaningful life..

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